There's a problem with the quality of the sound in the video for question 4. There are large gaps of silence and the when the voice over does come in, it is drowned out by some weird bird squawking noise. Where did you record it, in an aviary? Secondly, I think to really get the highest marks, which you are clearly capable of, you should try to apply a little more academic theory that you've encountered across the course. Theories of audience reception, narrative, representation etc. You mention Goodwin once, but there needs to be more of this. Q3 needs to reference audience theory. Finally for question two, you should talk about "product unification' not just continuity. Hope this helps.
you need to make sure that q4 covers the research, planning and evaluation stages. At the moment it only covers construction.
ReplyDeleteThere's a problem with the quality of the sound in the video for question 4. There are large gaps of silence and the when the voice over does come in, it is drowned out by some weird bird squawking noise. Where did you record it, in an aviary?
ReplyDeleteSecondly, I think to really get the highest marks, which you are clearly capable of, you should try to apply a little more academic theory that you've encountered across the course. Theories of audience reception, narrative, representation etc. You mention Goodwin once, but there needs to be more of this. Q3 needs to reference audience theory.
Finally for question two, you should talk about "product unification' not just continuity.
Hope this helps.